REMOTE CONTROL RACING CARS

On the weekend of the 3rd of March, I went to the Ryde BMX track with Robert and Christ.
When we got there it was very crowded in the car park and we wondered where everyone was because there weren’t many people on the BMX track.
So we parked the car and then we saw a lot of people surrounding a little track with speeding cars going around it. There were also about five people controlling the cars from a high platform. The cars were about 30 cms long and 15 cms wide with big tread on the tyres and a flap on the front so that they wouldn’t tip over.
The after the races they were awarding trophies to the winners. When we were just going a boy was controlling a car around the track and it was going very fast. Someone else had a three wheeler motorbike, but it didn’t go as fast. Then we had to go, so we packed up the car and then we left.

(Taken from An Introduction to Genre-Based Writing)